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I showed you and told you
all my secret places and
girlhood dreams as
we laid in the long grass in
the field behind my house,
staring up at the sky.

Your arm as my headrest,
your heart, my time piece,
and I never felt so vulnerable.

And August was never so blue.
©2007-2009 ~Eleh
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:iconjustanemptysoul:
wow...this is amazing. it actually made my heart hurt because of all emotion in it. great job. :rose:

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~*Dana*~

Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
:iconeleh:
Thank you :-)
He was once my world.

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:iconjustanemptysoul:
you're welcome. :rose:

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Anthony and Dana--December 1, 2007
"I'll stop the world and melt with you"
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this is amazing, so much emotion. great job (:

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:iconeleh:
Thank you!
First love, y'know.

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I love the ambiguity of the last line: is it referring to the blue, blue sky, or the blue feeling of being vulnerable? Great work. :thumbsup:

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Dank je... nog eens. ^^
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I hadn't really thought about it. I'm mostly sure it's more, alluding to the intensity and distinction of detail life takes on during such intimate <open,vulnerable, terrifying> moments rather than the sky or vulnerability, specifically.

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Heheh, I hadn't seen it that way! :D Thanks :)

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Kuulilennuteetunneliluuk!

Dank je... nog eens. ^^
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Of course :-)
Everyone interprets differently.

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